Juelz Santana Feat. Lil Wayne - Move The Damn Thing

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To me YOU SUCK!!! sound like a broke ass lil wayne... get ya own style N get ya bars up b-cuz u aint sayin shyt on yo songs.

x2 ... no one could of said it better!

check me out. im 17 and i do all the editting myself. no shitty lyrics, and good quality. i expected to hear something good on your myspace page and i heatd 10 sec of 625 or what ever it was and i was kind of like ehhhhhhhh. www.myspace.com/triplerappage

I'm gonna give this you a listen. I'll let you know what I think. Gotta show some love for the 269.

Ay my nig...thanks fo mildly sayin dat shit nice lol...can u critique me on anything ??....how many songs did u listen to on my page ?? J Sax

Track) 269: Delivery was off, the beat kinda left you (not that it was any good in the first place).. i figured you was just playin around on that track so i went to the next track

Track) Show you how: I heard Auto-tune and turned it off, today i decided to bite down and listen to it all the way through to give you a good critique on it, Decent delivery, but i bet it's better if you actually flowed on it and not edited ya voice with the A-Tuner.. Nice hook tho.. Beat was ok. - btw there's a break in that track might wanna fix it.

*Track) Weekly Theam: Best beat choice, your best track, flowed well, good hook, you followed and delivered with the beat well..

Track) Up&down: HORRIBLE.. I couldn't listen past the first verse.

Track) Merk the beat: You let the beat run away from you during ya verse but tried to compensate with a decent hook that flowed along the beat well.. - That song was funny but it was also kinda lame.. fell flat toward the middle, the audio is screwed up really bad on it too -+ KEEP THAT CHICK AWAY FROM YA MIC

In all if you work on ya craft you might get to the point of being decent as hell, but work on ya lyrics, and the way you deliver those lyrics, and be careful not to try and rap on a beat thats gone leave you, thats one flaw a lot of nigga's have, tryin to get on any beat thinkin it's gone disguise ya flaws, it only worked for a couple of nigga's in the game so far, but ya voice has a pitch where i can hear every word unlike nigga's like Gucci that can mumble and grunt words out and make anything sound ok over decent production, so you have to make sure you deliver ya lyrics on mark. - keep ya head up, keep at it, a lil patch work and you on ya way.

Hope this helped out, im all for raw talent, just don't get irritating with it by spammin us please? - betcha neva had a thorough Critique like this huh? one day imma tell ya'll what i use to do.

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I can't wait for that "one day". You're like the mufuckin regulator on here

ON THE REAL I THINK YOU WAS A BIGGER HATER THEN YOU IS NOW FUCKING MARK

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THANK U SO MUCH MY NIG...like real talk I appreciate dat... and ok....all these are in differnt time periods...and as u know...if u a good one u learn from your mistakes...and u get better and better as time goes on...so umm, this is the order i did the songs in..like in time periods...old to new...1.) murk tha beat umm I was using a crappy program..couldnt edit to well...2.) 269...so yea as time goes by..im slowly gettin more passionate and better...3.) up and down...I know i didnt do good on dat....i can even say thats sum bullshit..4.) show u how: new audio editing program...and i said i wanted to do sumthin fo tha ladies..so yea...and if u listen to tha lyrics (i feel they're pretty good...) then 5.) Weekly theme heard tha beat...didnt even know i had tha beat...so it was a surprise to me...and i just went off from tha start... but yea like i said thanks bro....and im workin on stuff right NOW !!! and i guarantee to deliver sum hot shit...and as far as the "spamin" goes....i was just tryna prmote my stuff...but now imma slow down a lil bit till i get my shit staight.. J Sax

Im surprised DNINC came through fa a nigga,i bet thats like ah early chrismas present fa that nikka, I guess DNINC aint dat bad afta all, thats some real ass nikka shit, i got some homeboyz that might hit u up in priv to let you critquie theyre songs, i like how you peeled each track and did that shit almost professionally, im real curious now to know wat the fuck you use to do! Plus you probably single handedly stopped the endless spammin goin on in here, dats some trill shit. I aint listen to bo myspace, but i listened to this mixtape song and it's just aiight 5/10 [ |_-DON'T GET IT FUCKED UP-_| ]

GOD IZ OVER.

Until today.. lol dayum [ |_-DON'T GET IT FUCKED UP-_| ]

yea he did stopp tha spammin...cause i sho was not bout to stop lmao J Sax J Sax

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www.myspace.com/triplerappage im 17 and i do all the editing myself. i can produce but i do lots of industry beats.

growth & development... decent track not bad......